Gogo Yubari ([info]x_pinballwizard) wrote,
@ 2006-12-18 21:08:00
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slash_100 ; 007
Title: Waltz Poynter, Finale
Fandom: McFly
Characters: Dougie Poynter/Danny Jones
Prompt: 030;Sight
Word Count: 554
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Dougie's developed a rather intense infatuation, and Danny doesn't have a clue.
Author's Notes: I haven't thoroughlly checked this, so I apologize in advance for any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors.

Part One
Part Two



Dougie sat completely still, his head buried in the crook of Danny’s neck. He didn’t even move when the older boy began to play with his hair. There was an almost painful silence that filled the room, threatening to aggravate Dougie’s nerves to their breaking point, but those warm strong hands running through his hair were keeping him strangely calm. He would have been rather content if Danny stopped asking questions, but this was Danny and Danny always asked questions. More questions than really necessary.

“Why are you chasing a bloke that doesn’t even know? Maybe you should tell him. What if he fancies you too?”

Dougie felt a bit strange talking about Danny as if the boy weren’t even in the same building, when in reality it was Danny he was telling all of this to. At the same time though, it felt good to get it off his chest. He felt a pang somewhere in his heart at the thought of telling Danny, and he just closed his eyes tightly as he remained in Danny’s embrace.

“He couldn’t, it’s not possible..” he sighed, shifting his head a bit. He wanted to badly just to admit everything to Danny, but there was something holding him back. He couldn’t do it in person, he wouldn’t be able to handle the humiliation. Dougie hoped that whenever Danny found out, he wouldn’t be in the room. “Maybe if he would just open his eyes, he’d realize..” Dougie pondered, not realizing that he’d just said it aloud.

The silence that fell between he and Danny scared him, he knew Danny was racking his brain, trying to figure out who it was that had captured Dougie’s heart. As much as he wanted to move, in case Danny did figure it out, he was glued to his spot. And as much as he wanted to crawl into a hole and cry, he couldn’t. His aching heart told him to stay, to wait for Danny to understand, so he did. He waited in the thick silence for an answer, a question, anything. His breath caught in his throat when Danny muttered four little words.

“His eyes are open.”

Dougie still couldn’t move. He needed to know what Danny was thinking, even if the boy was disgusted, Dougie needed to know. He’d gone long enough, chasing and lusting after one of his best friends, and him not having the slightest idea. “Fuck..” was all that left Dougie’s mouth.

All coherent thought seemed to leave Dougie for a few moments, and it even felt like his heart had stopped beating. He was overrun with nervousness and anticipation, waiting to hear Danny tell him he’s disgusted. He swallowed heavily when he felt Danny’s nose against his cheek, and he jolted back slightly, looking up at Danny in confusion. To his surprise he didn’t meet the boy’s deep blue eyes, in fact, they were closed. Dougie’s own eyes were wide in horror, and he couldn’t fathom why Danny hadn’t shoved him away yet. He truly hadn’t been expecting the reaction he got from Danny, and so he had no idea what he was meant to do.

“D-Danny..” he stuttered out, voice unintentionally wavering. Dougie was vulnerable. Vulnerable, and completely frightened. But everything fell into their exact positions when Danny answered.

“His heart is open, too.”


fin




( x-posted to [info]mcflyslash )




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[info]englishbrand
2006-12-19 05:31 am UTC (link)
I had to go back and refresh my memory, but once I read the first paragraph of part one, I remembered! I'm glad this ended like it did, it was totally cute. I loved "Dougie’s own eyes were wide in horror," for some completely odd reason. I just had to laugh at the image that came into my head.

I loved this! I'd love to see more from you in the future as well. :D

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:17 pm UTC (link)
I'm amazed you remember this, and thank you :]

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[info]siri_in_da_hood
2006-12-19 06:09 am UTC (link)
Lovely!
You need to write more, you're an amazing writer.
I envy you. =P

Wonderful job.

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you darling, but you needn't envy me.

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[info]elzawelza
2006-12-19 11:23 am UTC (link)
awwwwwwww! that was gorgeous! :D welcome back btw :D

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Aww thank you sweetie <3

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[info]scribblemusic
2006-12-19 04:47 pm UTC (link)

*Squeals*

Soooooooooo freakin' cute! I love it!

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Haha I'm glad.

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[info]the_first_chibi
2006-12-19 05:21 pm UTC (link)
awww, that should have a sequel or something, it was really good :)

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:22 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked it.

I don't know about a sequel though, it's odd enough for me to write a multi-chaptered story.

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[info]jess_darkwater
2006-12-19 06:08 pm UTC (link)
I clicked on this thinking that it would be nice to read some good PoynterJones for a change, since your fics are always well-rounded, grammatically perfect, interesting and my kinda style--more description than dialogue.

Thank God I did! I remember reading the first part and I've reread it all.

Thank you for writing this. It's nice to see that someone else can write this pairing and make it real for me.

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-19 07:52 pm UTC (link)
Aww, best comment yet. It's nice to know that description is appreciated by someone other than myself, and I'm thrilled that a PoynterJones pro like yourself enjoyed this

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[info]kirstini
2006-12-21 12:37 pm UTC (link)
It's lovely! <3

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[info]kirstini
2006-12-22 11:55 am UTC (link)
AND. I LOVE the name. Simply because I love FFTL. And it's like Waltz Moore <3

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[info]x_pinballwizard
2006-12-22 03:20 pm UTC (link)
Yay FFTL! Dougie's not as deep in self-loathing as Sonny is, but it was the best fitting title I could come up with.

<3 your icon. It's class.

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[info]kirstini
2006-12-22 05:42 pm UTC (link)
It's a good enough title! :D It made me smile, haha.

Cheers, I love your icon too, lmao.

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[info]x_pie_x
2007-05-23 12:52 am UTC (link)
A little slow on the uptake, but I just found this in memories, and wow.

I love, love, love your description, it's simply amazing, you convey Dougie's feelings so excruciatingly.

And the final line of course...I am in a veritable glass case of emotion.

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